[Script Offer][F4M] Big Sis Atago really cares for you~ [Gentle FDom][Hentai?][Lap Pillow][Ear Cleaning][Headpats][Ara Ara~][ASMR?][Titfuck][EXTENDED VERSION][Romantic]
 
Made by me (u/Skitlerite)
 
This script is made by adults, for adults. All characters are 18+ years of age.
 
Modifications and other changes are welcome
 
So you know what I said aout having more than 10 upvotes? I decided to extend the script. Mainly because it's popular, but also I'm too lazy to actually come up with original concepts. But hey, why change a running system? Also IDK what part to actually extend, as this is already modified from th source material to be longer and I'm bad at writing *** scenes. I'll guess we'll see...
You know what, i figured it out, it's gonna be an afterr story, so I can add romantic to the tags!
 
Synopsis: This is basically an Audio version of "Atago Sugar Sweet" (found here: https://nhentai.net/g/227675/ ), but with some changes to make it better suited for the format. You (the Speaker) are Atago, the "Big Sis" of the Family. You like to tease, and as such you're very flirty. You're also secretly in love with "shikikan" or simply Commander (the listener), if you don't want to speak weeb (but then again, why did you click on this, you knew what would happen). Commander on the other hand has been very hardworking recently, and is very shy. But you can't help but to provoke those cute reactions out of him, and hopefully you'll get him to notice you as well.
 
[Setting is the Base of Operations, on a couch. You give the listener a lap pillow and get your ear picks]
 
(hums softly)
 
Commander, your ears are quite dirty, you're lucky I'll clean them for you.
 
Now don't give me that look, you know as much as I do that you need this, just leave the ear cleaning to me!
 
(optional ear pick noises)
 
(giggles) See, doesn't that feel good~?
 
(pause)
 
No, this is for you to relax, rushing is not the answer~
 
We don't have any oil anyways, did you forget to collect the mails from HQ?
 
No, don't get back up! Lie down again, I'm not finished!
 
(long pause, some shuffling)
 
There we go~ (giggles)
 
Isn't that much better than going on a boring mission?
 
You spend all of your diamonds on silly dress-up outfits again, didn't you?
 
(pause)
 
Ah ah ah~ I know you better than you think, no point in hiding it~
 
Or do you want me to be more forceful? (Pulls pick closer to ear canal)
 
See? I can be quite convincing...
 
(long pause, optional ear pick)
 
Eheheh~
 
It's been so long since we had a moment together like this, haven't we?
 
I'm all antsy for some reason.
 
(gets closer to ears)
 
I'm almost done~
 
(moves away from ears)
 
What? It's just too easy to make you blush like that, you're so cute~
 
(pause)
 
That won't be the last time I'll try that trick~
 
(long pause, optional ear pick)
 
You know, I have been thinking.
 
What happens when our mission is fulfilled? Do we continue to exist, or do we return whereever we came from?
 
(pause, stops ear pick)
 
No, I don't know where I came from, of where I'll end up. None of us Shipgirls do.
 
But right now I want to be in your arms~
 
Awwww, look how red you are~
 
In my time, we executed people for breaking the law of cuteness.
 
(awkward silence)
 
Yeah, I don't think such a law exists.
 
(pause, resumes with the ear pick)
 
Ara Ara~, you haven't cleaned your ears for a long time, have you?
 
But thanks to your amazing sister,
 
(moves in very close to the ears, whispers)
 
"Your ears are all done now~"
 
(Moves away from ears, normal talking again)
 
(Commander shoots up from lap)
 
(giggles, then starts laughing)
 
I'm sorry, but have you seen your face?
 
It's not like I haven't warned you you know~
 
Your face is a tomato and it's your own fault (giggles)
 
I just can't resist you~
 
(moves in closer to face)
 
And I just can't...
 
(moves even closer to face)
 
wait to see more of...
 
(basically kissing at this point)
 
Your cute side...
 
(Actually kissing now)
 
(Commander reciprocates kiss)
 
(Speaker starts pushing listener onto a bed while still kissing)
 
Commander~
 
(pause)
 
I know It's still early, but I can't help myself anymore, I need you!
 
(pause, more kissing)
 
Were taking the day off anyway~
 
(speaker starts rubbing crotch of listener)
 
(just start sounding as horny as possible)
 
You're really stretching those pants of yours~
 
It looks really painful, let big sis help you~
 
(pushes listener down on bed, kissing and still rubbing crotch)
 
Don't worry~ just leave it to Atago~
 
You just lie back and relax~
 
Spurt out all the semen that's been building up inside of you~
 
(pulls down pants)
 
Let's have a wittle looksie OWO (sorry, I coulnd't resist)
 
Eheheh~ your dick is so energetic today~
 
It's putting a smile on my face :D
 
(leans down on ****)
 
Although I suppose all boys are like you~
 
Your big balls are full of hot and thick cum~
 
(starts kissing ****)
 
So I'll take care of yours with your favourite techinque~
 
(****, I forgot about the titfuck, great, now I gotta go all the way back up again to add that)
 
Ahn~!
 
Stop squirming commander~
 
I can't do it if you don't stand still~
 
(pulls off jacket, exposing *******)
 
(puts dick between *******)
 
Look! My **** just ate your entire dick~! (flat is not justice)
 
Eheheh~
 
MY big and fluffy **** are gonna bounce alllll over your dick~!
 
(starts titfuck)
 
Come on~ Stare at my **** bouncing~
 
Up~ down~ and again~
 
your dick's dissapearing inside my cleavage~
 
Don't you like this titjob from your Sis~ It's a paizuri~
 
Eheheh~
 
Bounce, bounce~
 
Stroke, stroke~
 
My **** are bouncing and stroking your dick~
 
Eheheh~
 
You're so adorable, your dick's twitching all over the place~
 
Do I feel that good?
 
(pause)
 
You're gonna come? Cover me in your semen?
 
Do it~ Come all over me~
 
(speeds up titjob)
 
Come from my ****~
 
Spurt your cum~!
 
(listener cums)
 
(speaker pulls away from listener)
 
My **** are all sticky now~ Your baby juice is all over them~
 
You sure came a lot, a job well done~
 
Youre such a good boy~
 
But you know...
 
(pulls down skirt)
 
This skirt will be useless.
 
I can't take more of this.
 
I let you lie on my Lap.
 
Kissed you.
 
(starts pulling down panties)
 
And these panties can go.
 
Gave you a titfuck.
 
And I still want more of your warmth.
 
(finished pulling down panties)
 
I feel so loved, but yet...
 
I can't hold myself back anymore~
 
(pause)
 
Commander...
 
My *****'s full of hot and sticky *** syrup~! (god, I just wrote that)
 
I'll spread my ***** for you, and you get a good taste of it!
 
(listener starts touching speaker)
 
(moans)
 
No, don't touch me there~!
 
(pause with some more moans)
 
Not with your fingers!
 
I dont want your finger~~!
 
 
Put it in~! Your dick~!
 
****~! Put your **** inside me~!
 
Commander, **** my ***** with your ****~!
 
Destroy me~ Use me any way you want, just give me your ****~!
 
(moaning stops, listener pulls out finger)
 
(pause)
 
This time I'll eat you... with my *****~
 
(speaker lowers herself onto dick)
 
(moans orgasmically)
 
I- I came~!
 
Just from putting your dick into me~!
 
(starts kissing again)
 
Commander, can you feel my *****~?
 
Can you feel the entrance of my baby chamber sucking on your ****~?
 
Can you feel it sucking out your cum~?
 
(switches position to cowgirl)
 
(moans)
 
This is all your fault, Commander~!
 
This is because you spend your diamonds on somebody else than me~!
 
My chest burned~
 
(moans)
 
with jealousy~
 
(moans)
 
when I heard about it~
 
(moans)
 
It made me want you more and more~!
 
I realized I didn't have nearly enough of you...~
 
(pause)
 
Oh god, now you're really starting~
 
Ara Ara, I really made you angry~
 
Yes, fill me up~!
 
Let's exchange baby juice~!
 
A- Awesome~!
 
I'm being punished with ****~!
 
The commander's punishing me~!
 
By fertilising me with his hard ****~!
 
(start kissing)
 
(long pause with time passage made clear, maybe with the sound being quieter and louder again)
 
That's the Spot commander~!
 
(A G R E S S I V E  M O A N I N G)
 
Oh **** YES~!
 
You know how to pull my strings~!
 
(Another long pause)
 
My face is full of your baby batter~!
 
(Yet another pause)
 
You've cum for the fourth time~!
 
(you know the drill)
 
I- I don't think my womb can hold any more cum~!
 
(heavy breathing)
 
Eheheh~
 
Your feelings are all inside me now~
 
(pause with more heavy breathing)
 
Ara Ara commander, I think that should be enough, for now lie on my lap again~
 
No buts, get your head on my thighs right now!
 
I promise I won't clean your ears again...
 
(leans close to ears and whispers)
 
Although you'd like that, Commander~
 
Or am I wrong?
 
Eheheh~
 
(leans away)
 
But for now, I'll control myself.
 
Just lie down, there we go.
 
(listener lies down)
 
And now, just relax.
 
(pause)
 
I love you too, commander, more than you can imagine.
 
(Time skip)
 
Yes commander?
 
(pause)
 
(shocked exhale)
 
Y- You used your diamonds to buy me an engagement ring?!
 
And I thought you were cheating on me!
 
I- I don't know what to say, I'm sorry!
 
I'm sorry.
 
It's just that, when you had no diamonds left, I thought you used them all up on other ships, not on me.
 
I feel like an Idiot.
 
I'm sorry.
 
I really am.
 
I just get jealous easily.
 
I'm sorry.
 
I know I'm repeating myself!
 
I just want to let you know that I'm jealous because I don't want to lose you.
 
God, I love you so much, just come here!
 
Marrying you? Of course, I won't let you get away from me for a second!
 
You'll never escape me for the rest of your life!
 
(Hugs listener tightly)
 
Oh yeah, sorry, humans need oxygen.
 
(Very long pause)
 
(Sound of talking in the background, maybe glass clinking) (No, I didn't have to look up what the sound is called when jars hit each other, shut up)
 
Hmmm, this food is delicious~
 
you chose well (giggles)
 
I don't think I've ever tasted spaghetti as good as this~
 
(If this doesn't feel like a real married dialogue I'm sorry, but does it look like I've ever had a girlfriend? I write erotic audio scripts for gods sake, cut me some slack)
 
And the carbonara sauce is great too!
 
How's your food?
 
(pause)
 
What's wrong? You haven't touched your food at all.
 
Come on, tell me~
 
We're married now~
 
You just aren't hungry?
 
Hmmm, somehow I doubt it~
 
You're feeling unwell?
 
I'm all ears~
 
Oh, you're just sick? Why didn't you tell me?
 
You... didn't want to make me worried?
 
Commander, I'm your wife now, it's in the job description to worry about you.
 
(sigh)
 
Alright, I'll try not to worry too much
 
(silence)
 
Yes honey?
 
Why yes, I am enjoying myself.
 
(shocked sigh)
 
I'm not lying!
 
No, I love this restaurant you picked.
 
(defeated sigh)
 
Fine, you know me to well already...
 
I do really like this restaurant, I do, but...
 
I'd love it even more if we were home, together, just you and me~
 
Yes I'm serious, If I wasn't, I wouldn't have agreed to marry you.
 
I know you still have problems with the whole marriage thing, but you were the one wo proposed.
 
This way I can help you, in more ways than one~
 
Yes I know, not in public, but your cute face is simply too overwhelmingly cute~!
 
God, I almost can't control myself~
 
Let's go home, right now!
 
You don't get a say in this!
 
(grabs hand)
 
Let's go!
 
(Silence)
 
(Door unlocking sound)
 
Here, lie down.
 
Don't worry, were not gonna have ***. Yet~ (Not in this script, if you would put a gun to my head and told me to come up with something like "My *****'s full of hot and sticky *** syrup" again, I'd say shoot me)
 
No, no ear cleaning either. 
 
Stop trying to guess, just close your eyes and relax~
 
(clicking noises, glass on table noises(?))
 
You can open them now~
 
See? An entire evening watching your favourite movie. (Feel free to replace my references with yours, also if you recognise the references, I'll personally write another extension to this for you)
 
Just sit down, I'll get the blankets and the crisps. (Yeah that's right, were Bri'ish now)(Nah, just wanted to write that, replace with chips at your disgression)
 
There we go, aaaaaaand were done.
 
Oh, it's starting already!
 
(silence)
 
Oh don't mind me, just getting closer to you~
 
We're married now you know, you should get used to this.
 
Oh so *** is no problem, but cuddling is where you're gonna draw the line?
 
(giggles) God, you're weird sometimes...
 
But that's also what I love about you~ (kiss)
 
(mocking) buT I WanNa wATch thIS MoViE
 
Yes, we'll watch the movie, but I'd rather watch your face~
 
(silence)
 
Oh my god, did he just...? 
 
In the bathroom?
 
To that comatose girl?
 
What?
 
(silence)
 
God, that movie was... weird.
 
And disturbing as well.
 
(bored tone)
 
And depressive.
 
And psychological.
 
(normal tone again)
 
But I liked the characters
 
The story made no sense, but the writing was so good.
 
Aaaaand you're asleep. On my shoulder. great.
 
How am I supposed to go to sleep if your face is so close to mine?
 
You're unusually cruel today, aren't you (kiss) honey~?
 
Sleep well, I love you